Go back to school
My name is Jesse,was born in Ping-Tung.
I've been a nurse for several years.I like English but I don't know how to improve my English by my self.Before I went to cram school,but that's difficult for a nurse who got night shift sometimes.During the work I 've hurt my back.I knew that I need to take a break and I also felt a little tired about my high-pressure job that has too much pressure.I've thought abot thing my job into one that no heavy workload or too much pressure.So that make me a choice,to be a student.My English is poor and I still want to improve my English so I decided to go back to school to study Eglish.That's why I am here.
I've been a nurse for several years.I like English but I don't know how to improve my English by my self.Before I went to cram school,but that's difficult for a nurse who got night shift sometimes.During the work I 've hurt my back.I knew that I need to take a break and I also felt a little tired about my high-pressure job that has too much pressure.I've thought abot thing my job into one that no heavy workload or too much pressure.So that make me a choice,to be a student.My English is poor and I still want to improve my English so I decided to go back to school to study Eglish.That's why I am here.
posted by jesse at 5:29 AM
1 Comments:
Hello Jesse
Well done! Your writing is quite good. It is not as poor as you said. Can you try to expand the autobiography into several paragraphs? Maybe talk about your worries or plans for the future?
1.My name is Jesse,was borned in Ping-Tung.
--> I was born
2.During the work I 've hurt my back.I knew that I need to take a break and I also felt a little tired about my job that has too much pressure.
-->my high-pressure job.
http://dictionary.cambridge.org/define.asp?key=97728&dict=CALD
3. I've thought what kind of job has no hardwok and no too much serious pressure.So that make me a choice,to be a student.
-->I have thouth about changing my job into one that has no heavy workload or too much pressure.
--> Becoming a student again seems to be the best choice.
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