Do Not Resuscitation
What is the best time to do CPR?When a healthy person gets hurt or is in a life-threatening situation,for example,serious injury in a car accident,drowing,asthma attack,and heart attack, if CPR is done as soon as possible,the sufferers will recover soon.On the other side if the patients are dying as they have degenerating problems or the organs are damaged as a result of long-term illness.Keeping their life become difficult.Of course modern treatment can keep their hearts beating and the respirator can keep their breathing,yet if those equipment are removed,the patient could died soon.No more suffering for them.
posted by jesse at 8:40 PM
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When the healthy people suddenly got hurt for example:car accidents,drowing,asthma attack,and heart attack if the CPR has done as soon as possible,the sufferers will be recovered soonly.
-->When a healthy person gets hurt or is in a life-threatening situation, for example, serious injury in a car accident, ..., if CPR is done ...will recover soon.
they have degenerate problems or the organs were damaged of suffered the illness for long time,keeping their life become difficult.
-->degenerating ...are damaged as a result of long-term illness, ...
Of course we can do more the treatments to keep their heart beating and use the respirator to keep their breath.But without the first-aid medicine and the respirator they could be dead soonly.
-->Of course modern medical treatment can help keep their hearts beating and the respirator can keep them breathing, yet if those equipments are removed, the patient could die soon.
No more suffer for them.
-->suffering
-->Is this your topic sentence? Make it stronger and clear. Remember all other sentences have to be related to this sentence.
On the other side if the patients are dying as they have degenerate problems or the organs were damaged of suffered the illness for long time,keeping their life become difficult.Of course we can do more the treatments to keep their heart beating and use the respirator to keep their breath.But without the first-aid medicine and the respirator they could be dead soonly.No more suffer for them.
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