The five main types exercise,ball games,swimming, jogging,yoga and cycling,make up 95% of total favorite exercises in leisure time.Other types of exercise comprise the remaining 2%.Ball games made up 40% of total favorite exercises.Swimming constitutes 20% of total favorite exercises.Jogging constitutes 15% of total favorite exercises.Yoga has the same percentage as cycling.Those proportion are 10% of total favorite exercises.Ball games is the most popular exercise.
Comparing the different piece of a pie chart:
Yoga,had the same percentage as cycling was.Swimming consists of double as much as swimming does.And the popularity of jogging is only third eighth of the most popular ball games.People likes double as much ball games orthers receivedthe remaining 5% as the favorite exercises
Specific data:
With regard to this pie chart,it can be foundfin that yoga and cycling are the same in that the both received little enthusiast. Ball games had the greatest popularity, with 40% .Swimming comprise20%,which is twice as much as ball games.
Comparing the different piece of a pie chart:
Yoga,had the same percentage as cycling was.Swimming consists of double as much as swimming does.And the popularity of jogging is only third eighth of the most popular ball games.People likes double as much ball games orthers receivedthe remaining 5% as the favorite exercises
Specific data:
With regard to this pie chart,it can be foundfin that yoga and cycling are the same in that the both received little enthusiast. Ball games had the greatest popularity, with 40% .Swimming comprise20%,which is twice as much as ball games.
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The main exercises types of ball games,swimming, jogging,yoga and cycling make up 95% of total favorite exercises in your leisure time.
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Other types of exercise include the remaining 2%.
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Ball games contain 40% of total favorite exercises.
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Yoga,like cycling,have the same percentage is one quarter of ball games.
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Swimming consists of double as much favorite exercise as swimming does.
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And the popularity of jogging is only thierd eighth of the most popular ball games.People likes bouble as much ball games/the orther has least 5% percentage of favorite exercises
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-->Others received the remaining 5 % as the favorite exercise.
With regard to this pie chart.we can find out that yoga and cycling are the same in that the both have little enthusiast,also they are less proportion by 10%.
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Ball games has largest popularity of favorite exercise by 40% .
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Swimming comprise20%,which twice as much as ball games.
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